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Fochi

I realised that the worst way for kinaesthetic learners to study is just staring at their own screen…?😨

めるみな

久々に英語企画に挑戦したく、その試作も兼ねて自作の一行詩を英訳していました↓

原詩:
(またいつかと折れゆく指が告げる予感の乾きを伝い)

めるみな英訳:
(Feeling apart from tomorrow, my left hand hesitates to stay open, with the dryness in a hunch its finger has)

所感:
・冗長
・原作者であることを味方につけすぎて、意訳しすぎている

DeepL英訳:
(The dryness of a premonition that a broken finger announces will come again)

所感:
・めるみな訳より短くて良い
・theとaの使い方が一緒で嬉しい
・premonitionは悪い予感との意味合いがあるので、そこを汲んで訳している
・a broken fingerだと骨折しているので面白い[ロケット]
（ここの「折れゆく」はfoldやbendが適切）
・指一本のイメージで訳している
・announceはやや情緒に欠けている印象
・詩全体の理解が原作者の意図からは大幅にずれている

ChatGPT英訳:
(Once again, someday−
The breaking fingers
Convey the dryness
Of a foreboding sign)

所感:
・「以下の詩を訳してください」と伝えたためか、− や改行がなされている
・めるみな訳より短くて良い
・Once again, somedayは気に入りました
（somedayだけでは音足らずですが、once againと重ねる発想が良いですね）
・ここでも指が骨折している[ロケット]
・複数の指はイメージどおり
・theとaの使い方が一緒で嬉しい
・forebodeのニュアンスは強すぎる
・詩全体の理解が原作者とずれている
（conveyが動詞の意図はない）

いろいろ反省しためるみなの再英訳:
(Once again someday, the fingers slowly bend,
and through the dryness in their hunch runs)

結論: 自作の英訳もAI翻訳と遊ぶのも面白い◎

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石油炒饭

Short steps, deep breath
Everything is alright
Chin up, I can't
Step into the spotlight
She said, "I'm sad,"
Somehow without any words
I just stood there
Searching for an answer
When this world is no more
The moon is all we'll see
I'll ask you to fly away with me
Until the stars all fall down
They empty from the sky
But I don't mind
If you're with me, then everything's alright
Why do my words
Always lose their meaning?
What I feel, what I say
There's such a rift between them
He said, "I can't
Really seem to read you. "
I just stood there
Never know what I should do
When this world is no more
The moon is all we'll see
I'll ask you to fly away with me
Until the stars all fall down
They empty from the sky
But I don't mind
If you're with me, then everything's alright
If you're with me, then everything's alright—To the moon.

EITA

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